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Mer de Noms

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It reflected onto the eyes, light blue
Fine crystals
Unpolished
Dead.
Many of them
All of them
Dead.

I found one
Jaundiced and swollen
With yellow air
And grey lips
Mouth gaping like a terrible black cave.

I leaned into her fish corpse aura
She was sodden and salty
Her crystal eyes disfocused..
"What is your name, miss?"

Her arms were twisted
Towards her water grave..
It looked heavy
And the sun coruscated over all their crystal eyes
Unpolished
Dead.
Many of them
All of them
Dead.



1/31/11
this needs some serious editinggggggggggggg
PLEASE HELP
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AlterEgo1629's avatar
As soon as I saw Mer de Noms, I got excited. Your poem blew me away. Amazing.